Us - Minus One

Today the strangers didn't come
In fact, no one did
The house was empty
And far too quiet
With just the ghosts of our past
Floating silently on the wind
as our only companions

I miss you dad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 23, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Great tribute to your dad! Have a happy holiday!
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