Us

God made us,
From sand and dust,
we lived and lost,
But life ends us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 5:37 PM
You have unique style I can identify with. Great write.
Neels Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:31 AM
Interesting piece Duval :) thank you for your kind comment to mine :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Interesting penned lines..Enjoyed...Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara
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