Ursa Minor

Jupiter, your fallen house, A strife, and unto me, A deal that mirrors that of Faust When Hell’s my home to be? Mercury, you orbit close Gemini, the Twins, am I Side by side, am juxtaposed- To Pluto’s ruling Sign

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Mark Peterson

Date: 10/28/2013 10:14:00 AM

This is the sort of poetry I wish I could write. I enjoyed it. Mark

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/28/2013 11:08:00 AM

Very kind of you to say, Mark; I appreciate it very much. Thanks for dropping in and for the read and review :)

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 8/26/2013 4:26:00 PM

You must be a sky watcher, too! Loved it! Especially the reference to Faust...I think of the Flying Dutchman, too.....V (PS I have always loved the term, fallen house---a taint of Greek tragedies...)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/28/2013 11:09:00 AM

Sorry I didn't respond to this sooner, Victoria; I guess I overlooked it; my apologies. Thanks for the read and review :)