Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

Urge

Unheard danger bells cast
unseen venomous fangs
unknowingly cursed for
undone sin and making
upset their kith and kin
utmost forlorn and I
urge Him to save mankind.

 Pleiades U Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman 
Syllables checked at HS
Date written: 01-05-2021
Place : 4th

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Sara Kendrick May 18, 2021 at 5:04 AM I like the spiritual side of this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara Patri Venkata Ramana June 7, 2021 at 2:41 AM Thanks a lot for the best compliments.

Kim Merryman May 4, 2021 at 7:44 PM Great descriptive language, Patri! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Patri Venkata Ramana May 6, 2021 at 8:49 AM Thanks a lot for the best compliments.

Jan Allison May 3, 2021 at 3:51 PM I got a chill reading the poem with danger and venomous fangs! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Patri Venkata Ramana May 6, 2021 at 8:48 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.