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The toddler’s steps were tentative; His daddy held his hands. They slowly made some progress; Every parent understands. What caught my eye was on their heads - Both sporting baseball caps, The dad’s a well-worn Yankees one, A favorite, perhaps. The toddler’s was, of course, brand new, Though I have got to say It elicited a laugh because The logo said LA!

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Date: 10/27/2024 4:43:00 AM
Well spotted Ilene, nothing escapes your keen eye. Tom
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/27/2024 2:12:00 PM
Such nice praise, Tom! Thank you!
Date: 10/26/2024 3:57:00 PM
Toddler probably got a gift from someone other than Dad. Your poem shows warmth and happiness. It is a smiley.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/27/2024 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so much , Hilda! Your comment are very uplifting!
Date: 10/26/2024 2:40:00 PM
I’ve said it before, Ilene, but I’d love to see a poem in stuff that just happens. You do it so well and I’m a little envious ;-)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/27/2024 2:11:00 PM
Terry - I am such a huge fan of yours that it's a real thrill to hear that from you! Thank you…

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