Upswing

span of profound growth
                                 mixed bag of flowers and fruits~
                                             with lofty spirits 

      
                                         fluorescent day break
                                         vibrancy in life around~
                                          stupendous summer


Place : 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:04 PM
a very upbeat set about summer. It's probably my favorite season
Merryman Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 6:45 PM
Nicely done, Patri! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 12:51 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Andresen Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 9:51 AM
- A great summer poem, Patri - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 12:52 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
Kitchin Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful set of haiku's!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 12:53 AM
Thanks a lot for your best compliments.
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