Olusegun Arowolo Poet Rhyme

Upset Father

He made up his mind not to complain any more.
Though is being told not to use cane anymore.
He`s very angry and feel so upset for his action.
This  makes the truth hard to ascertain anymore.
Telling lies is now part of his character.
Which has made honesty tough to obtain anymore.
He sways to and fro like a pendulum bob.
Yet,he`s tired of treating him with disdain anymore.
Even now  he plans to leave him alone,to rot!.
Not to reprimand or punish him again,anymore. 




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Sheri Fresonke Harper November 17, 2013 at 7:30 PM What a cruel father, I hope he isn't upset often, congratulations on this poem Olusegun!

Skat A November 15, 2013 at 11:04 AM Olusegun, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

Sandra Adams November 12, 2013 at 9:06 PM you did a good job with this form...congrats on your win in the contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta November 12, 2013 at 3:23 AM Congratulations on the win, Olusegun

Karen Anglesey November 11, 2013 at 7:22 PM You depicted this very difficult situation quite well. :) Congrats on being a winner in the contest

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2013 at 3:38 PM He sounds like a very ambiguous kind of parent! an interesting approach to the theme!

Emmie Ay October 20, 2013 at 4:07 PM Great poem, I'm sure there are many people out there who can relate to this.

Sara Kendrick October 18, 2013 at 4:04 PM Interesting work..Reads like a child has become the parent..Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like winning material to me..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta October 17, 2013 at 10:17 PM Nice emotional write on father, Olusegun