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Uprisings Amidst Turmoil

The druid churns the magic potion, More gains are his only notion. But men and women to take along, Is not his goal and he’s so wrong? Power blinds his wretched mind, Oh! His deeds put all to the grind. Dying creative powers they soak to grounds, Of the hallways, whose going to turn it around. People cry their minds a whisper, All time idly spent in repent. Passion dies yet another death each day, And things not achieved all kept at bay. Winds of change come sweeping across the globe, The soothsayer swings his wand & depths he does probe. A new brotherhood of people he plans to build, Trusts he those who have desires are unfulfilled. Two years back, in November, at the nerve centre, 20 monks indicated to the leading lights along with their mentor, The way ahead after spells of erudition under learned teachers, A blind eye they turned then, today they all chant like preachers. My plea to them is to let go of ego and come together, As forces across the globe are down in the slump in all weather. Together all must be to tackle the dark forces that surround, It’s creativity that will bring back from depths, to astound To build the cult the soothsayer has begun, The dominos must align as now nobody must be the favorite son, Err if it has been; now there is no way on land but to move ahead, Cause the ships in troubled waters have already fled………….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/13/2012 7:09:00 AM
I am happy to see that you have removed the errors and made it an excellent one.I read it again.This is based on reality.Perhaps you might have passed my village Orumanayur on your way to Kochi.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/13/2012 7:53:00 AM
yea i always do pass when i drive down from goa to kallor( my parents live there). thanks once again for the tip....
Date: 2/11/2012 9:18:00 PM
Hi Sashi, your words are powerful with feeling. The strongest emotion we humans have is hope, and with hope there IS a road forward. Love and peace Wordancer
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/12/2012 8:57:00 AM
thanks amillion. u stop to live when u stop dreaming... u stop to hope when u stop believing... hope is a strong emotion and i believe. thanks for your warm words...~peace be with all who walk this earth
Date: 2/11/2012 10:06:00 AM
This is really a great work,sashi.But I hope you read and modify it again, avoiding certain minute grammatical errors to make it your masterpiece.Which part of Kerala are you from? Thank you for your nice comments on my poem.Good night!
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 2/12/2012 8:13:00 AM
i wrote this amidst tears and dejection on the highway between calicut and kunnamkulam on a rainy nite on my way to kochi and have preserved it that way .. thanks for the tip ill modify it.

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