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Upon Their Broken Shoulders

Through their unselfishness They fight for our rights Never giving up Enduring the darkest of nights As they continue to fight We angrily protest Yet still they fight on Never asking for rest They struggle to live on While we safely sit here They die to protect us Giving us no reason to fear They fight out of love For us and our country They ask for nothing back Fighting for us to remain free Never do we remember As today turns into tomorrow What they have provided us Only thinking of our sorrow These guardians are our heroes They die in their ranks Yet never do we give them A well-deserved thanks Always remember the men and women Who are known as our soldiers For giving us a foundation Upon their broken shoulders

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/6/2009 12:04:00 PM
It's good, and the message it carries is so true!
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Date: 12/17/2008 12:05:00 PM
I appreciate you pointing that out, I edited it to contain men & women now, because you're absolutely right, they serve our country with equal devotion and pride... I apologize, but thanks again, I feel better about my poem now!
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Date: 12/16/2008 12:59:00 PM
I love this poem, but please remember the women who serve our great country with pride, and devotion....men, and women, side by side doing what most can't imagine....always, Christy
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