Upon the Waters' Moon

The clouds scudded across
A windswept sky
It was deepest night
As I watched magic pass by

The moon had risen
There it hung in soft silver
Scattering beams of light
Upon the waters, bright

Its' pale reflection on water
As I watched magic pass by
If I could catch the moonlight
I would cast it upon midnight waters
Beneath a windswept sky

Upon the waters' moon
I saw beams of light
I could not tell if it was 
Starlight or moonlight
All I saw was the faintest ripple
Upon the waters' moon
In deepest night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/10/2011 1:19:00 PM
marvellous writing....well done
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:56:00 AM
This is full of wonderful imagery. Very nice piece. Have a wonderful day! Scarlett
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Date: 7/12/2010 1:38:00 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
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Date: 5/19/2010 1:41:00 PM
This is beautiful <3 i adore it. ~rain
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Date: 2/15/2010 10:30:00 AM
Excellent write about that moon that we sometimes experience at night. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:03:00 AM
What a beautiful poem on a moonlit night! Full of beautiful imagery, Matthew! Goes to my favs.! Peace, Audrey
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