Upon the Silence

...however as he slothfully reclined
Banking himself on the cold steel bench
Dilemma gripped nastily on his shoulders;
The clouds pace above and as if alive
Winked at him- pulling memories from behind

"Oh yes, we are but a speck of a seed
A granule, puny and almost trivial
By how- minute as we- pull off an impact
Than a lone tree in a dry sunny land
And lighted cottage amidst dark forest indeed?"

Resounding they truly are, his mentor's words
Past and spoken, long uttered in the wind.
Yet it reverberates from the turquoise skyscrapers
To the bench he sat beside his proud Ford.

"For the proper or for the practical thing?"
An innocent query shrieking upon the silence.
a galleon of betterment versus virtue;
The bright clouds blots his space on the wide greenery.
"Affirmative." A salmon is going upstream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 9:10 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 21, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Nice to see this one again, Jazer. LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Jazer, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Jazer. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 21, 2010 at 7:51 AM
JAZER, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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October 19, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jazer. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 10:13 PM
An excellent verse, Jazer! So glad I had this opportunity to read it! Congratulations on it being featured this week on PS... Love, Audrey
Temkin Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 3:45 PM
I loved this. It was a very enjoyable read :) interesting
Palli Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 12:05 AM
loved the title, loved the words
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