Upon Angel Wings

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Restless slumber disturbs the lady; swift thoughts float
Like yachts  silently sailing by the grand keynote
After the short, hot night of summer's compact dreams

Active fluid inferior frontal gyrus streams
Unsettled speculation ends when sudden beams~
Dawn arises upon angel wings of soft white

Offers reflection of topics on which to write
Deep in grooves seeking spiritually nonfinite
Awaiting the rising of a bright fireball sun

Expressions imprinted released outward for fun
Or curtail humor get ready my son much done
That opens a new summer day to fulfill all

Spirit filled day open to wonder what might fall
Sweet angels surround, lift, caress, remove pitfalls
As the sun arises gold prophesying hope

Let hope radiate out full like a kaleidoscope
The language bring communion like a gyroscope
Angels guard precious souls 'til they arrive home

After the short, hot night of summer's compact dreams
Dawn arises upon angel wings of soft white
Awaiting the  rising of a bright fireball sun
That opens a new summer day to fulfill all
The hot sun arises gold prophesying hope
Angels guard precious souls 'til they arrive home

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Crown of Couplets contest sponsored by Catie Lindsey
Written: July 05, 2016

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Judy Ball

Date: 7/11/2016 11:40:00 AM

Well done Sara. After a hot night of restless dreaming dawn comes on angel's wings bringing new hope. My take on this. Beautifully written and well expressed. A seven from me. God Bless and thanks for stopping by to visit me. JB

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/11/2016 4:10:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by..Great line you came up with..You encouragement is uplifting..Sara

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/6/2016 10:52:00 AM

Sara, An excellent write here!! I wish all the best in Catie's contest. I really like your particular strategic usage of each of the last verses in each stanza. In my opinion, this creates a continuous thread that idea-wise ties the thoughts of the whole poem together, ending with the final six-verse stanza. Well-Done!! "7" Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. Thanks also for commenting on my most recent poem on the evil siren!!)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/6/2016 2:04:00 PM

Thanks for the kind review of my work..The form of the poetry was designed by Catie for her contest so that is the reason for the work being so written..Sara