Uplifting

I brace two beautiful bald heads a pair of eagles spreading their wings 10/27/2020 17 syllables - 8/5/4

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/29/2020 4:09:00 AM

I love it that this honors your parents and their eagle strength.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Caren! Mom started losing her hair. She needed a haircut so now cut it fairly short. She was freaking at beginning but is being a trooper now. Who wouldn’t! Love my parents!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2020 12:03:00 AM

Pity I never saw an eagle in my whole life. Only sparrows. ~~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2020 4:48:00 AM

I love the song, “His Eye Is On The Sparrow.”

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2020 12:59:00 PM

- I can see 4-5 eagles from my window ... a magnificent sight ... free flow in the wind ... (they have been gone for a while now ... I saw them every day in the spring ... I think they hunted for the little lambs) - Lovely written, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 5:35:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :) Thanks for sharing!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/27/2020 7:58:00 AM

Love the way you framed this one, Kim, as with the tip of my finger I blot out the sun... Happy Tuesday, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 12:55:00 PM

I can see you doing that :) Thank you!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/27/2020 6:56:00 AM

I love eagles, and what they represent. There strength has no boundary when it comes to the horizon of the sky, I wish we were more like eagles, sometimes . I think people who love creatures, make the best human beings, Have a beautiful day my friend, be well. xo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, Pixie! I love what you wrote. This poem is in honor of mom who has cancer...her hair is starting to fall out and my dad who says he will shave his head for her. Blessings!