Home » Poems » Unseeking Seeker » Uplift

Unseeking Seeker | + Follow Poet |

Uplift

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Unseeking Seeker.

unfreeze now, oh hermit umbilical cords bind unkempt is lower mind unshackle innocence usher in bliss upsurge under divine guidance until the end of time 30-April-2021 Pleiades U poetry contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman 7 lines @ 6 syllables each

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2021 3:30:00 AM

Got this one correct. We have to work on it everyday. Congrats on your win. Sara

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/6/2021 7:15:00 PM

Dear Seeker, Congratulations on your win in the U Pleaides contest. This is a really cool poem. Carol Louise

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/6/2021 7:52:00 PM

Thanks Carol!

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 7:12:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Unseeking Seeker! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/4/2021 8:22:00 PM

Thanks to you, for hosting these Pleiades contests!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 3:11:00 PM

you did well with U:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/4/2021 8:21:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2021 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/3/2021 7:59:00 PM

Thanks, Kim

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/1/2021 1:23:00 AM

You seem to be fixed a some hermit today. Still it is an excellent Pleiades and sure to get top place.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/1/2021 2:56:00 AM

Ah! You’ve discovered a thinly veiled secret of mine! I use this term quite frequently in my poems

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2021 6:51:00 PM

Hi Seeker, You did an excellent job with the letter U. Good message as well. You made it look easy. It was a challenge for me, but I managed to write something—this a good contender for the contest. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/30/2021 7:00:00 PM

Great fun, these Pleiades doodles!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2021 5:11:00 PM

this one is one of the best. Love it!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/30/2021 6:59:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, matter of chance I guess, that it turned out so well!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/30/2021 9:45:00 AM

Love your pleiades, Seeker:-) This U one certainly is a toughie and you pulled it off with aplomb. Great job!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/30/2021 9:54:00 AM

Thank you, Edward! Yes, I found U-Pleiades challenging, more so, since I wanted it different from the ones already written, while in sync with the themes I prefer to write on