Unseeking Seeker Poet Verse

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Uplift

unfreeze now, oh hermit
umbilical cords bind
unkempt is lower mind
unshackle innocence 
usher in bliss upsurge
under divine guidance
until the end of time

30-April-2021

Pleiades U poetry contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

7 lines @ 6 syllables each

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Sara Kendrick May 14, 2021 at 3:30 AM Got this one correct. We have to work on it everyday. Congrats on your win. Sara

Kim Merryman May 4, 2021 at 7:12 PM Wonderful imagery, Unseeking Seeker! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Unseeking Seeker May 4, 2021 at 8:22 PM Thanks to you, for hosting these Pleiades contests!

Jan Allison May 3, 2021 at 3:11 PM you did well with U:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Unseeking Seeker May 4, 2021 at 8:21 PM Thank you, Jan!

Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2021 at 1:29 PM Congratulations! Unseeking Seeker May 3, 2021 at 7:59 PM Thanks, Kim

Victor Buhagiar May 1, 2021 at 1:23 AM You seem to be fixed a some hermit today. Still it is an excellent Pleiades and sure to get top place. Unseeking Seeker May 1, 2021 at 2:56 AM Ah! You’ve discovered a thinly veiled secret of mine! I use this term quite frequently in my poems

Alexis Y. April 30, 2021 at 6:51 PM Hi Seeker, You did an excellent job with the letter U. Good message as well. You made it look easy. It was a challenge for me, but I managed to write something—this a good contender for the contest. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Unseeking Seeker April 30, 2021 at 7:00 PM Great fun, these Pleiades doodles!

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2021 at 5:11 PM this one is one of the best. Love it! Unseeking Seeker April 30, 2021 at 6:59 PM Thank you Andrea, matter of chance I guess, that it turned out so well!

Edward Ibeh April 30, 2021 at 9:45 AM Love your pleiades, Seeker:-) This U one certainly is a toughie and you pulled it off with aplomb. Great job! Unseeking Seeker April 30, 2021 at 9:54 AM Thank you, Edward! Yes, I found U-Pleiades challenging, more so, since I wanted it different from the ones already written, while in sync with the themes I prefer to write on