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Uphill Through the Pines

In the flush of hot summertime, I took the scenic route,
Up a hill of pine trees, when all of nature was in fruit!
All along the fragrant path, I relished that winding road, 
Swept away by multitudinous colors, beauty had bestowed!

The dawn had grown so lovely, with its cotton candy skies,
So like the debut of springtime, in its blushing surprise!
And I was welcomed with sweet songs, into Birdland Manor,
In the blooming golden age, of nature's youthful glamour!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Theraven Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Evelyn, A scenic ride through the pines. Enjoying the welcome 'sweet songs' from Spring's habitat in 'Birdland Manor'. No finer place to be in your vision's pages. -Richard
Buehler Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for the welcome expressions of enjoyment, Richard. Have a wonderful day. Evelyn :D
Y. Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 10:50 AM
WoW! Evelyn, Your nature poems are such a treat to read. The imagery is always so stunning. Everything looks amazing. It was a joy to go up the hill with you. Great job. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Alexis, for your wonderful words of appreciation, and for accompanying me on this nature walk. Have a lovely evening! :D Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 1:48 AM
Your nature poem comes out so natural. The one I wrote feels labored. Pines are fragrant indeed.
Buehler Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 3:36 PM
That is not my impression at all, Victor. Your nature poems are magnificent! Thank you for the lovely compliment. :D
Horsman Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 9:48 PM
I love the flush of summertime, in this wonderful poem, where one is taken to walk through it's blushing surprise.
Buehler Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 3:33 PM
It delights me that you enjoyed it. Thank you. :D
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