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In the flush of hot summertime, I took the scenic route, Up a hill of pine trees, when all of nature was in fruit! All along the fragrant path, I relished that winding road, Swept away by multitudinous colors, beauty had bestowed! The dawn had grown so lovely, with its cotton candy skies, So like the debut of springtime, in its blushing surprise! And I was welcomed with sweet songs, into Birdland Manor, In the blooming golden age, of nature's youthful glamour!

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Date: 4/27/2021 8:30:00 AM
Evelyn, A scenic ride through the pines. Enjoying the welcome 'sweet songs' from Spring's habitat in 'Birdland Manor'. No finer place to be in your vision's pages. -Richard
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/27/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome expressions of enjoyment, Richard. Have a wonderful day. Evelyn :D
Date: 4/26/2021 10:50:00 AM
WoW! Evelyn, Your nature poems are such a treat to read. The imagery is always so stunning. Everything looks amazing. It was a joy to go up the hill with you. Great job. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/26/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis, for your wonderful words of appreciation, and for accompanying me on this nature walk. Have a lovely evening! :D Evelyn
Date: 4/26/2021 1:48:00 AM
Your nature poem comes out so natural. The one I wrote feels labored. Pines are fragrant indeed.
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Date: 4/26/2021 3:36:00 PM
That is not my impression at all, Victor. Your nature poems are magnificent! Thank you for the lovely compliment. :D
Date: 4/25/2021 9:48:00 PM
I love the flush of summertime, in this wonderful poem, where one is taken to walk through it's blushing surprise.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/26/2021 3:33:00 PM
It delights me that you enjoyed it. Thank you. :D

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