Upbuilding Poetry

My cousin Nick and I went down to town
To take a gander at what’s goin’ down
Long lines of people at the coffee shop
So many people it was `bout to pop
Both of us wondered what the buzz was
“Come on let’s go and check it out, Cuz”

Hey Nick, ol’ Brandy’s reading poetry
Some of the best if you are asking me
Y'all can tell that girl is from the South
Poetic verses flowing from her mouth
Y'all come down now take a look-see
Hey Nick, ol’ Brandy’s reading poetry

The next day Nick and I returned to town
Another gander at what’s going down
Long line of people at the bookstore
More people than we seen the day before
Said Nick “Let’s stand in line and buy her book”
We joined the queue and got a better look

Hey Nick, ol’ Brandy’s writing poetry
Some of the best if you are asking me
Poetic verses flowing from her pen
With Southern flavor and a touch of Zen
Y'all come down now take a look-see
Hey Nick, ol’ Brandy’s writing poetry

At last, we made it to front of the line
She signed our books said “Hope you’re doing fine”
Tongue-tied and nervous nothing did come out
Even poor Nick could not open his mouth
We hurried out and headed back to home
So we could read her poems in peace alone

Hey Nick, ol’ Brandy’s tender poetry
Conveys a feeling of tranquility
Her little scribbles serve to spring hopeful
Her messages of love reclaim the soul
Y'all come down now have a look-see
Discover Brandy’s tender poetry



3/21/2020

As this COVID-19 pandemic rages all around us, how encouraged I am when poets, like Brandy and others, use their gift of poetry to build up one another.
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Nicole Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Mark, my heart is smiling while reading these words from your pen once again. To have a poem dedicated to me, leaves me in complete awe. I appreciate you and our friendship. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Toney Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Hi, Brandy. What a nice surprise :) Your kind expressions are much appreciated. I’ve noticed others here writing tribute poems to their fellow poets. It makes for a kinder, gentler atmosphere. Take care! ~Mark
Nicole Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Dear Mark, your thoughts caress gently around me. I write from the heart- scribble outside the lines. So sweet of you to dedicate this to me. I strive to always uplift and encourage with my words. We have been friends here since I joined. I appreciate you and your wonderful thoughts, for always being supportive and kind. Thank you doesn't seem enough, but I truly thank you for these words. You humble me. I wish to place this in my favorites. Because.. :) Brandy
Toney Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 9:51 PM
You are so very welcome, Brandy. I wanted this poem to highlight the effect that your upbuilding poetry has had on others including myself. I remember you said to me that there are so many uplifting poets and poetesses here. How nice it is to use poetry to upbuild others. Thank you too for placing this in your favorites. ~Mark
Gondolf Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Mark, I enjoyed your tribute to one on my favorite poets. I always look forward to reading Brandy’s latest scribbles and she never disappoints. I am glad to know that others recognize her talent too. All the best. John
Toney Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 9:36 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, John. I also appreciate that whenever I read your comments on any poet's poem, you are always thoughtful and considerate. ~Mark
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Hello Mark Toney, i have enjoyed this poem. yes it is nice to see or read that Brandy and others use their poetry to build up one another .Enjoy your evening my friend. Stay safe.
Toney Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Thank you for your gracious comment, Darlene, and your well wishes. Enjoy your evening and stay safe too. ~Mark
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