Up In the V-Berth

up in the v-birth
our lovers turf
this is what I see

you lay under the covers
where we were lovers
sleeping I let you be

I left you laying there
I just had to stare
there was so much to see

your hips nice and cutt
the covers to your butt
I love them completely

I could see your boob
so silky smooth
a beautiful double D

on your boob was your hair
that none could compare
beautiful as could be

I just watched you
my love so true 
the one just for me

she is my true love
from heaven above
sent just for me

and though I'm a wild card
she works realy hard
does everything for me

she get health insurance
so there is no deterant
a doctor I go see

she even washes clothes
acourse I don't oppose
clean she'll have me be

she is so smart
with a beautiful heart
don't know what she sees in me

I help her raze her son
treat him like the only one
my little scallywag he be

no matter what occurs
I know's I lover her
and she, loves, me

and she holds my soul
by my fishing pole
caught like a fish I be!

by Capt. Mike

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/24/2011 6:11:00 AM
LOL very sweet in a diamond in the rough sorta way arrrrrghhhh! Light & Love
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