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Up in smoke, twice born, we live on Lower mind falls away We as bliss mist, love hues adorn To rhythm divine sway Oh hermit, know the cause Recognise now, God’s laws That that died, never was Dream life joke Up in smoke 07-January-2021 Quietus This or That, Vol 9 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/28/2022 3:56:00 PM
Wonderful poem and form, Seeker:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 1/28/2022 6:24:00 PM
Happy you liked it Edward! :)

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