Up In Heaven

Someone whispered once to me
You see up there, up there we’re free
We cannot see it or know its gate
But it’s from down here we live to wait
And when its time, our time to go
Up there to heaven is where we’ll blow
Towards the light, our spirits shall ride
To a magical heaven where hierarchies abide
Its spiritual radiance of all that is calm
A place of celestial divinity as sited in psalms
Just perfect and beautiful and gloriously pure
With magnificent colours that heal all obscured
Souls of the past of future of present
Working together in love light and inerrant
With unicorns and Angels and all that is free
And one day amongst them soon to be me.



26 August 2018
Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/26/2019 3:43:00 PM

A nice heavenly piece Francesca, nicely penned indeed as its always good to think on heaven. Blessings, Gordon

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 7/15/2019 1:08:00 PM

Thank you again, Gordon. Greatly appreciated :)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/1/2018 7:05:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Francesca. A true gem for sure! I also wrote a poem called "Up in Heaven" but much different than yours. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Very nice to meet you as well. Happy Holidays and many blessings...Charlie

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 12/3/2018 3:25:00 AM

Really appreciate it, Charlie. Many Thanks for your message :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2018 5:53:00 PM

I am so glad to see you on this list with this gem. Congratulations.

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 9/21/2018 5:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much Andrea for your support as always :) xxx

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 9/19/2018 3:08:00 AM

This is a wonderful poem with a nice flow and beautiful imagery, I absolutely love reading it, many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 9/21/2018 5:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Faraz. Really appreciate it :)