Up But Down -Part1

Up,but Down…Part-1

This bus old as this rutted road
Panting to haul its sweaty load
Moves along the steep gradient
Of these hills stoutly determined

Raising to heights which although small
Are far like aeons  beyond recall
To the place men and maps from yore
Call by a name now part of lore

It stops and ejects a lone man
Bearded, forlorn, bag and baggage
A petty  forest  official
Perhaps on punishment transfer

To these hills, unfeeling and cold
Where his ticket has taken him
Which could take him no further, no less
Away far away from sweet home

To where it’s for predators home.
It turns left, heaves off a U-turn
Climbs on to a conglomeration
Of tenements of refugees

From a strife-torn island, whose hopes
Are holding breath in another land
Uprooted  amidst the rooted
All at sea amidst hardy rocks.

And returns to the highway where
The forest man still stands rooted
Aghast where he was offloaded
Like one of those gaunt and old trees

Failing to find his way to those
Who came before, missing the link
With the before and with the now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 6:07 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..That would be a bad punishment to be isolated like that..I hope that wasn't you but just about someone that you once knew..Great work with good flow to it..Thanks for stopping by my work..Cooking is a big job that many women enjoy..Some don't like it..I don't like the clean up..Sara
Palmer Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 5:17 PM
great write JAG,hope the forest official helps him to get a ticket back home
Song Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 6:09 AM
The rhyming in the first 2 stanzas is wonderful...Liked how you described the hills--unfeeling and cold. It's as though this man you described has some sort of mental illness. A sad scene of his bereft state...(on to part 2......great story here, jag.)
Wesley Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 9:37 AM
This is quiteaq story Jag, I seem to be able to picture what you are saying and feel sorry for the old fellow left standing there.
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