Up At the Pole

Santa loads
his bright sleigh
takes no roads

elves must work
all the time
never shirk

Mrs. Claus
bakes all day
Santa’s laws


Written 12/26/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 4:09 PM
I am feeling very sad for Mrs. Claus with all that baking. I enjoyed reading your winning interpretation of the contest. Congrats..Sara
Hoffman Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Thanks very much, Sara. I just LOVE writing Christmas poems. My favorite time of the year.
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 11:57 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Terry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hoffman Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 1:59 AM
Thanks, Sunshine. I have not written in this form previously.
Messina Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Great Charlieku, Terry. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wish you a very Happy New Year. Charlie
Hoffman Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Thank you very much, Charles, and a Happy New Year!
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