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Up And Life Below

Life is high and low state Depending on how you assimilate things The eyes is the window of your soul Your perception differs the meaning On top your sight is too sharp Even the slightest movement you can discuss Below things you see is limited and grounded But very realistic and meaningful life. Life you live here is all written There's a writer up above that do the jotting Whether seen or even the secret can't hide Our life is borrowed yet destined To make your own history a sad or happy life Depending what role you act in this life's movie Doing good or bad acting in life matters Will determine your real fate in the ending part. It's the view from the top That makes your ego on high The impression sound impossible Since you accustom living below Your eyes look down in fascination All beautiful things underneath But because of danger you wish on land To permanently register your humbleness. Going back to your normal state life You differentiate two things with awe Of how life is fortunate to glimpse The chance to see life be on top or below On top you see things in small spectrum Here below you see thing in grandeur dismay In totality, you grow in grace with wisdom For all you see will come to note on soul.

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Date: 2/4/2025 11:39:00 PM
wisdom is necessary to progress, like love, thanks for the insightful poem, best wishes
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 2/5/2025 12:38:00 AM
If we go deeper in life, true wisdom redown to spiritual thing. Whatever we do should be connected to the salvation of our soul. Life is borrowed only and there's accounting in the end, after death is the judgment. Thank you, Yann for the insight.

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