Gideon Idudje Poet Cinquain

Up and Down the Staircase

Age is 
Just a Parcel
At teenage we were dates 
By gray days we fade wear away
You are
A package and will get broken
Someday up the golden
Staircase falling
Backwards


3/5/2020
Let The Pens Flow Butterfly Ciquain Poetry contest
Sponsor:Jenish Somadas







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Sam Kauffman May 14, 2020 at 11:25 PM Very unique, Gideon. Congratulations.

Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 9:50 AM Someday up the golden Staircase falling.. Beautiful line.. Congrats on your placement Gideon.. Gideon Idudje May 14, 2020 at 9:54 AM Thanks goes to you

Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 5:38 AM "someday up the golden staircase falling"...such a deep metaphor for life when it gives us downfalls amid victories. Your words are really meaningful. :) Gideon Idudje May 14, 2020 at 5:41 AM grateful heart !

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2020 at 2:51 PM yikes. falling backwards! I feel it coming on me!! I enjoyed this, Gideon.