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Up and Down the Staircase

Age is Just a Parcel At teenage we were dates By gray days we fade wear away You are A package and will get broken Someday up the golden Staircase falling Backwards 3/5/2020 Let The Pens Flow Butterfly Ciquain Poetry contest Sponsor:Jenish Somadas .

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 11:25:00 PM

Very unique, Gideon. Congratulations.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/14/2020 9:50:00 AM

Someday up the golden Staircase falling.. Beautiful line.. Congrats on your placement Gideon..

Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/14/2020 9:54:00 AM

Thanks goes to you

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 5:38:00 AM

"someday up the golden staircase falling"...such a deep metaphor for life when it gives us downfalls amid victories. Your words are really meaningful. :)

Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/14/2020 5:41:00 AM

grateful heart !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2020 2:51:00 PM

yikes. falling backwards! I feel it coming on me!! I enjoyed this, Gideon.