Home » Poems » Gideon Idudje » Up and Down the Staircase

Up and Down the Staircase

Age is Just a Parcel At teenage we were dates By gray days we fade wear away You are A package and will get broken Someday up the golden Staircase falling Backwards 3/5/2020 Let The Pens Flow Butterfly Ciquain Poetry contest Sponsor:Jenish Somadas .

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 11:25:00 PM

Very unique, Gideon. Congratulations.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/14/2020 9:50:00 AM

Someday up the golden Staircase falling.. Beautiful line.. Congrats on your placement Gideon..

Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/14/2020 9:54:00 AM

Thanks goes to you

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 5:38:00 AM

"someday up the golden staircase falling"...such a deep metaphor for life when it gives us downfalls amid victories. Your words are really meaningful. :)

Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/14/2020 5:41:00 AM

grateful heart !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2020 2:51:00 PM

yikes. falling backwards! I feel it coming on me!! I enjoyed this, Gideon.