Fameetha Alambasha Poet I do not know?

Up and Down

UP AND DOWN
Playing with my friends in chill air,
Skipping with my sister with a broken teeth,
Jumping with my brother with a broken leg,
Cooking with my mother with a burnt finger,
Climbing a tree with a broken leg,
Chasing with my father for my mischief,
But still, as a child, all I know 
Is to forget and re-try. 

I have a mind to play with my friends,
I have a leg to jump with my brother,
I have a finger to cook with my mother,
I have a head to climb trees,
But oh! What stops me ??
Alas! I don’t have a heart,
That feels free to be my own.
I wish I were a child again.

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Ibohal Kshetrimayum November 3, 2018 at 12:20 PM Too good to be true

Poet Destroyer A March 5, 2016 at 4:57 AM Awesome win

Sara Kendrick February 29, 2016 at 8:20 AM Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara Fameetha Alambasha March 1, 2016 at 7:23 AM thank you

Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 7:06 AM Wonderful write, Fameetha. Welcome to Soup and please feel free to express yourself. Hugs, Bobby Fameetha Alambasha March 1, 2016 at 7:23 AM thank you

Susan Gentry February 27, 2016 at 12:48 PM Congratulations on your win! Very creative and clever. Fameetha Alambasha March 1, 2016 at 7:23 AM thank u

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2016 at 3:51 AM - Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Fameetha - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Fameetha Alambasha March 1, 2016 at 7:24 AM thank u

Skat A February 20, 2016 at 8:29 PM Fameetha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Fameetha Alambasha February 21, 2016 at 7:19 AM May i know about u Fameetha Alambasha February 21, 2016 at 7:18 AM Hi... i am doing my UG course in Salem(INDIA).. thks everyone for your warm welcome...

Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2016 at 1:27 PM fameetha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA Fameetha Alambasha February 21, 2016 at 7:17 AM Thank you...

Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2016 at 1:38 AM Fameetha, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Fameetha Alambasha February 19, 2016 at 5:51 AM Thank You very much.. i am just a beginner.. but i am passionate towards poetry.. its my long day dream to post a poem.. so plz do help me to improve