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Unzipped Lips

Love’s emphatic sigh
Complete with warm air and wind
Saying I love you

Entrant into Nancy Jones' "Unzipped Lips" contest

5/16/2012

lifelovesenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

May 22, 2012 at 8:59 PM

wow, this is NICE, Russell. It's one I somehow had missed.

Joann Grisetti

May 18, 2012 at 11:54 AM

Lovely senryu. Best of luck in the contest.

Cecilia Macfarlane

May 17, 2012 at 5:19 PM

Wonderful sweet entry Russell ....I love it!

Sara Kendrick

May 17, 2012 at 11:19 AM

Enjoyed reading your work for the contest..Winner for sure..Whispered I love you are very special..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

May 17, 2012 at 9:38 AM

i can;t unzip my lips, russell.. got to say, " wow" for putting this together into one sensational imagery... i wish i can write like this!... sensational, my friend!..:) win it and huggs!

Nette Onclaud

May 17, 2012 at 9:38 AM

i can;t unzip my lips, russell.. got to say, " wow" for putting this together into one sensational imagery... i wish i can write like this!... sensational, my friend!..:) win it and huggs!