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Unwritten Absence

We left the light, We sojourned in the night, We journeyed in the dark, The night held sway. It was so long a night, It was so prolonged a fight, We traversed shrivelled meadows, Followed by our shadows. An absence of light, Wearied our hearts, An unwritten absence, Chauffeured a gloomy presence. We saw light afar, As we moved closer, It dimmed and died, Like a falling star. September 27, 2023.

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Date: 9/29/2023 3:43:00 AM
That last line stood out for me the most! So well written in a moving and catchy cadence that readers would truly enjoy and appreciate reading! Love this! Thank you for writing and congratulations on winning
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:43:00 PM
Thank you, Ink. I'm honoured.

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