Unwound

UNWOUND Sex n interest is a state of mind, the better the tease the harder it climbs, conversation puts it down, distraction men have found, it breaks the concentration, spring unwound, unwanted relaxation, frowns, so close your ears and hear her not, concentrating hard as what? slipping sliding till she's besotted, sweet loving from a time forgot fills the imagination..... Don Johnson

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Russell Sivey

Date: 8/5/2012 11:10:00 AM

This is quite the imaginative write my friend! I really enjoyed the creative way you went about being with a woman and the teasing that can come with it as well as the "unwanted relaxation", incredible! I just love this terrific poem Don! Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 8/5/2012 4:47:00 AM

Don, whoo hoo me likes this advice on romanc a lot, 'close your eyes and hear he not' reminds me of a joke , but we won't go into that.....Dave

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 8/4/2012 10:21:00 PM

I want more. Ivy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2012 9:00:00 PM

Hello, DON.. this is a hard-core ..i love the teasing points of s3x... mmm the end.... love PD