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Unworthy

Sea’s waves overwhelm Unworthy sailor at helm Into murky realm By Robb A. Kopp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 9:49:00 AM
I like it! Nicely written. It's short yet very well put.... Til another day, LM
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Date: 2/25/2010 7:21:00 AM
I feel like Luigi Vompa... A smuggler, a poet, THE pirate... After reading this wonderful poem my friend.....:JP]
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Date: 2/25/2010 7:04:00 AM
Ironically, your senryu describes the overriding message in a novel I'm currently rewriting. Many sailors deem themselves worthy until the sea gets rough. Had a boat for 10 years and went offshore fishing so I can relate to this. Great work, Robb! Love, Carolyn
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