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Unwinding the Hose

butterflies flight broke... living room’s filled with stale smoke pink elephants would choke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2011 3:27:00 PM
Unusual!
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:49:00 PM
Lovely jaiku with nice images, Robb
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:24:00 PM
Reads like a deadly place to live..Sara
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