Unwinding

Foolishly I acted in her presence
 After she left me ,realised her essence
  
an inextricable thread got removed, now my world looks palid
She embellished my life, like veggies to a salad


For she was the one guiding me when my mother wit crumbled
And now she is not there my life is back to jumble


Together we travelled to newer shores
Now a rambler, failing to manage even my basic chores


Acting as my spine , to counter the worldly sharks
Now In her absence I am again  back to the dark


The world for me now is upside down
Snide stories being cooked by the entire town


As cool as it sounds but it's hard to be single
Festivals aren't more thrilling nor I feel any jingle


We both were at fault, but never bothered to resolve
Even though you wanted ,the trust element dissolved


Now you are with someone else , and it's too late
You won't be coming back to me , 
even on unfolding an expensive bait


and even if you wish to return conditions have now changed
 cold breeze of differences  repealing you away from my range


Ego breaks a relationship into sand
Deluding you, being the incharge
But making it slip from your hand


So reach out to your beloved ones , before it gets late
Any minute/large difference, confront it straight


Unwind your feelings without any hesitation
Else keep on cursing fate in perpetuation
That you failed to assuage it's gravity
Now Crying over it till eternity!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/19/2024 5:40:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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