'unwind'

Don’t hold too tight in case fright grows things might change soon
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 9, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Thanks for this new Avatar.I am doing fine:)
K. Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 12:20 PM
you are so funny, you're making me feel all confused now-- or are you the one confused? haha. ok ok I might go to sleep now
Dufresne Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 3:43 PM
nice one Wilma and things ALWAYS change wether we want them to or not. good luck in the contest luv
Horne Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 1:03 PM
I love this clever than bauk, my friend. lfde : )
K. Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 9:11 AM
Very cool than bauk, here missy :) and yup sometimes gripping onto something might prove to be nastier-- ok, now let me unwind~ unwind~ love your title for this-- and thank you for your insights in my blink poem :)-- call me crazy but the way you said it there, why did I suddenly see myself as an alcoholic, nursing a bottle? mwahugs ;D
A   Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 10:12 PM
WILMA,, THINGS CHANGING CAN BE A GOOD THING RIGHT... TAKE CARE,..P.D.
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 2:05 PM
This form is hard to do..It seems that it will be so easy but not..I have written several and had to work them over more than once..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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November 12, 2011 at 1:17 PM
You have now showed me a really cool form to try, I hope I have enough insight to mirror this gem... wonderful.... with love across the pond Michael
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 12:21 PM
wilma, I think you did very well with this incredibly difficult form. I know it does not seem all that hard, but I tried one before and had a devil of a time because it is extremely limiting!! It is nice to hear from you this Saturday. Maybe it's Sunday by now where you are?
Seraphin Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 11:26 AM
* “What Is Fright? * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Wilma * I Would Somehow Imagine for The Lost & The Blind * Trapped the Chains of These Things * And Where Be Borne the Joy of Everlasting * What Mountains * What Pain * Everything Becomes Trans * Lest They Find Their Rightful Place Amid The Sun * Profound Is The Day * Very Lovely * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
Poet Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 11:04 AM
This is excellent wilma...best wishes.I am fine:)
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