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Unwind. As a tiring day Unwinds And goes to rest Blue skies turn to grey Closing the lid On natures bountiful Treasure chest Blackbird on high Bids farewell With it’s sweet Retiring lament The wild daffodil Closes delicate its petals and folds Now the day is spent And the lilac tree gives off It’s heady scent The air still warm Clings to the night As a caressing breeze stares The barleycorn Wiry trees provide an eerie sight Void of exposing daylight The creatures of the night creep Amongst the foreboding shadows The silver river still runs deep While all creation sleeps Within the stillness The night waits The wakening sun at daybreak And another day born Once more painting the lush landscape With vibrant colour and spender Now night has rendered The Blackbird on high Now celebrates the birth of day With joyful heart and reprisal song As a new day story Lingers on. Peter Dome©2019.

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Date: 5/27/2019 5:29:00 PM
Hi Peter : I enjoyed the manner in which you slowly approached each line as in a continuous flow. My compliments!
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Peter Dome
Date: 5/28/2019 1:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Ralph. I really appreciate you kind comments. Take care, Best wishes. Pete.
Date: 5/27/2019 4:35:00 PM
I really like it that you had a theme of blackbird on high throughout. "Blackbird on high Bids farewell With it’s sweet Retiring lament" Made the night seem safe.
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Peter Dome
Date: 5/27/2019 4:51:00 PM
thank you so much Care., so nice to hear from you. A lackbird was singing outside my window tonight.inspired me. glad you enjoyed it. Take care. pete.
Date: 5/27/2019 3:23:00 PM
A lovely poem full of evoking images. The sort of poem I would like to read with my eyes closed, if you know what I mean, regards to you Peter, great piece, Kevin
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Peter Dome
Date: 5/27/2019 4:53:00 PM
thank you so much Kevin. Much appreciated. I know what you mean. what a compliment. Take care. all the best pete.

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