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Unwillngly Willing

There is a feeling There is a feeling There is a feeling In the air I havent seen you in ages I didnt know you're contageous Now I wake up every morning feeling poisoned- So I took a pair of scissors And I cut you out my pictures And I know this sounds rediculous But I dont wanna catch your sickness There is a feeling There is a feeling There is a feeling In the air I got this feeling I cant explain But I sure can complain I was fine until you came Now I'll never be the same Who am I kidding I need you more than living Im unwillingly willing Im unwillingly willing There is a feeling There is a feeling There is a feeling In the air Now I'm caught in your vortex love stricken disease I'm a bit perplexed I dont want no one to save me You're pulling me in and You're pulling me in and I'm unwillingly willing I'm unwillingly willing There is a feeling There is a feeling There is a feeling In the air You're the object of my desire You're the arson that set my heart on fire *it's about how love can change your life even though you hate change.

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Date: 11/11/2014 10:47:00 AM
I like the premise of the piece. You confuse the narrative when you switch from first to second person. Instead of she you should still be talking to her directly, it is more intimate and moving.
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Date: 11/11/2014 12:01:00 PM
I did do that didn't I :) lol good catch. I will need to change that. Thanx

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