Unwillngly Willing

There is a feeling
There is a feeling
There is a feeling
In the air

I havent seen you in ages
I didnt know you're contageous 
Now I wake up every morning
feeling poisoned- 
So I took a pair of scissors
And I cut you out my pictures
And I know this sounds rediculous
But I dont wanna catch your sickness

There is a feeling 
There is a feeling
There is a feeling 
In the air

I got this feeling
I cant explain
But I sure can complain
I was fine 
until you came 
Now I'll never be the same
Who am I kidding 
I need you more than living
Im unwillingly willing
Im unwillingly willing

There is a feeling 
There is a feeling
There is a feeling
In the air

Now I'm caught in your vortex
love stricken disease
I'm a bit perplexed
I dont want no one to save me 
You're  pulling me in and
You're pulling me in and
I'm unwillingly willing
I'm unwillingly willing

There is a feeling 
There is a feeling
There is a feeling 
In the air

You're  the object 
of my desire
You're  the arson
that set my heart on fire

*it's about how love can change your life even though you hate change.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/11/2014 10:47:00 AM
I like the premise of the piece. You confuse the narrative when you switch from first to second person. Instead of she you should still be talking to her directly, it is more intimate and moving.
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Date: 11/11/2014 12:01:00 PM
I did do that didn't I :) lol good catch. I will need to change that. Thanx
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