Unwell

Even my best friend can't tell
That I just don't feel well,
Nothing's right, it's all wrong
Though I try to stay strong,
But all I feel is weak
And sometimes these eyes leak,
Yet even my so-called best friend can't tell
That I'm definitely,
Unwell...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 9:30 AM
I identified with this poem. Strong emotion and I love the brevity; you say so much in few words. Good job and kudos; enjoyed your piece :)
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 7:26 AM
- Consult your doctor .... Wishing you all the best!! - Sad... but good to have friends who can be there for you .... nice poem Arthur. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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