UnUsAl BrEeD

Letting her take the lead
Her every command l obay
Their in her hour of need
Be it night or be it day

Perhaps off each other we feed
Neither of us willing to walk away
At these times seems hard to read
Never listening to what shed say

Though not your tipcal pedigree
Still her mind game l then play
Perhaps l am an unusal breed
Never the sort  to stray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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July 21, 2026 at 2:24 AM
I love the rhythmic nature of your rhymes and how you expressed obedience for your beloved is so refreshing to read! Such love commitment always makes my soul warm! There is no walking away ~ when love is true and real. Pleasure reading you dear David Scott. Sending you light always ~
Scott Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Thank you for your kind words not my best effort
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