Untreated Mental Illness

There is a hush no one can hear,
A breaking sound beneath the skin,
A fragile mind that disappears
While all the world goes rushing in.

It comes like dusk without a name,
Soft-footed through the light of days,
And dims the heart’s once steady flame
To ash that trembles in a haze.

The mother’s eyes grow tired and wide,
The father learns a wordless grief,
They stand beside what once was bright
And cannot summon its relief.

Love lingers at a bolted door,
Calling a soul that cannot stay,
Each answer fainter than before,
Each night more endless than the day.

And somewhere in the silent deep
A self is lost it cannot find,
While shadows gather, slow and steep,
Around the corridors of mind.

O tender life, so nearly whole,
How easily the thread is torn—
A wandering, unguarded soul
May wake in chains or not at dawn.

Yet still, beneath the weight of night,
A fragile pulse of morning lies—
If only hands could reach in time
To lift the darkness from its eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 11:07 PM
I know what that's like- beautifully written, dark but so hopeful
Steinmetz Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 10:51 AM
this is so beautifully written and so relatable! nice job and i'm sorry for your struggles
Faure Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 3:45 PM
Enjoyed very much!
Mclain Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 7:43 PM
Thank you very much dear. James
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