Untouched

Sound of an
empty feeling,
A walk to clear
the lost,

An existence 
drowning in lonely,
As if our path
uncrossed,

I feel inside 
your presence,
A sense of a 
goodbye touch,

To dream this
long without you,
And dream of 
you so much.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 21, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Mario, I'm a little late:(. However, this is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 8, 2014 at 12:38 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mario - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 10, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Thank you and I am happy to be here..
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