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Untouched

Sound of an empty feeling, A walk to clear the lost, An existence drowning in lonely, As if our path uncrossed, I feel inside your presence, A sense of a goodbye touch, To dream this long without you, And dream of you so much.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/21/2014 7:39:00 PM
Mario, I'm a little late:(. However, this is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/8/2014 12:38:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mario - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mario Diletto
Date: 11/10/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thank you and I am happy to be here..

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