Untouchable Hearts

Lustful hearts are too hot to hold And depressed ones are just too cold, These dear old hearts can't be touched Even if they find someone they love too much, It'll never be propper... it'll never be right Even if they find pleasure in physical delight, No but these hearts must change if they hope to be held and find the illusion that they could be held... dispelled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dennis Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Great poem!
Brown Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Literrius. Love, Carol
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Wow Nice one. Now you got us hooked you have to deliver more of the goods. So don't keep us waiting. MORE!!!
Fitzgerald Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Liked this , welcome to soup Declan .
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