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Untold

Incalculable sheets of thoughts hidden
Boiling brain,mimicking sharp gnawing pain
Pretty soul lay there quite sick, bed ridden
Entrapped by deep surges of bloody bane
Her stamina, sleekly started to wane

Stepped in, her beloved from a far land
He sat beside sobbing and picked her hand
Stroking it gently, enquired the reason
She lay still, with expression being bland
Untold she croaked, in bleak winter season

Aug10, 2020

First Place in the Contest:-)
Note:Pick-A-Title, vol 21,Dizain Poetry Contest.
Title chosen:1)UNTOLD
Checked syllables:Howmanysyllables.com
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh.

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Jan Allison Date: 8/20/2020 10:08:00 AM beautiful but so sad, many congrats on your win V Deepa:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply V. Deepa Date: 8/27/2020 2:27:00 AM Thankyou Jan mam for always stopping by to compliment my work..:-) much love.

Edward Ibeh Date: 8/19/2020 4:56:00 PM Heartiest congratulations for your top win in my contest with this brilliant, poignant poem, Deepa:-) Awesome imagery, too! Login to Reply V. Deepa Date: 8/27/2020 2:26:00 AM Thanks a bunch Edward sir for your kind appreciation:-) It's a great honour to be placed at #1 especially in your Contest. Am glad that you liked my work.:-) Take care.Warm regards.

Eve Roper Date: 8/10/2020 1:03:00 PM Untold is a very sad poem my friend well said and written, good luck in the contest. You do not have to upload a photo to enter my contest; just put the number of the photo you use at the bottom of the date. So don't let it stop you from writing in any contest because of the photo. The sponsor can not see the photo or comment in the writing tools in you entry when you enter a contest. Eve Login to Reply V. Deepa Date: 8/10/2020 1:20:00 PM Thankyou for the appreciation Eve mam:-) And so kind of you to clarify my doubt and also thanks for encouraging me to write for the contest.Now that I have understood..Surely, I will give it a try.:-)Take care.Much love.~Deepa:-)

Jenish Somadas Date: 8/10/2020 5:33:00 AM Untold she croaked, in bleak winter season.. Beautifully penned.. Good luck in the contest Deepa.. Login to Reply V. Deepa Date: 8/10/2020 5:53:00 AM Hello Jenish sir, Thankyou for your kind support and appreciation:-) Am pleased to know that you enjoyed my poem.:-) I believe your doing well. Take care.Best wishes:-)