Untold

For my untold story has to unfold How can you sit on an unstable branch Left breaking to the mercy of the wind Consoling your muted heart for love lost Till you hear the sound of a big loud crash. There you are falling like a broken star Tears flow now from open skies to quench The thirsting of parched souls and broken hearts Your spirit is broken and so is your will Your untold love story now has been spilled 08.08.2020 Title UNTOLD Edward Ibeh

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/26/2020 11:07:00 PM

Wonderfully penned dear Carol mam:-) Loved the last line which spilled the love indirectly.. Congratulations on your win.It deserved much higher place.. Keep writing and keep inspiring.Tale care.Warm reagrds and best wishes from Deepa:-)

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/26/2020 11:10:00 PM

Thanks Deepa.....will do....much appreciated.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/19/2020 5:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome piece, Carol:-) I enjoyed it!

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/19/2020 6:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Edward....much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 11:33:00 AM

What a lovely "telling" of love untold! I should say spilling, and it spills beautifully in that ending! (my theme is similar to yours though I chose a different title!)

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/8/2020 6:11:00 PM

Thanks Andrea....much love.