Carol Mitra Poet Dizain

Untold

For my untold story has to unfold
How can you sit on an unstable branch
Left breaking to the mercy of the wind
Consoling your muted heart for love lost
Till you hear the sound of a big loud crash.

There you are falling like a broken star
Tears flow now from open skies to quench
The thirsting of parched souls and broken hearts
Your spirit is broken and so is your will
Your untold love story now has been spilled 


08.08.2020
Title UNTOLD
Edward Ibeh

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V. Deepa August 26, 2020 at 11:07 PM Wonderfully penned dear Carol mam:-) Loved the last line which spilled the love indirectly.. Congratulations on your win.It deserved much higher place.. Keep writing and keep inspiring.Tale care.Warm reagrds and best wishes from Deepa:-) Carol Mitra August 26, 2020 at 11:10 PM Thanks Deepa.....will do....much appreciated.

Edward Ibeh August 19, 2020 at 5:53 PM Congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome piece, Carol:-) I enjoyed it! Carol Mitra August 19, 2020 at 6:20 PM Thanks so much Edward....much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2020 at 11:33 AM What a lovely "telling" of love untold! I should say spilling, and it spills beautifully in that ending! (my theme is similar to yours though I chose a different title!) Carol Mitra August 8, 2020 at 6:11 PM Thanks Andrea....much love.