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Untitled Triad of Haikus

The lone rain puddle Catches the shimmering moon As it mimics the sun And mirrors the dreams Of our long ago youth With days eroded Like the shores upon Which we strolled, listening To the crashing waves

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Date: 8/5/2012 1:52:00 PM
Lovely series of haiku.
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:08:00 PM
Beautiful Haikus. I enjoyed reading this.
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Jennifer Cahill
Date: 8/10/2012 3:17:00 PM
Hi Sherese, Thank you for reading my poem. I read some of yours and was inspired to attempt a dizain of my own. Strangely, when I reread "That Girl", I realized we both referred to the word "yarn". It was such a coincidence! I hope, if you read my dizain, you did not mind. When I read "That Girl" the first time, I only read the first stanza. Again, I hope you do not mind, and thanks for reading my poem. Jennifer Cahill