Untitled Triad of Haikus

The lone rain puddle  
Catches the shimmering moon  
As it mimics the sun  
    
And mirrors the dreams  
Of our long ago youth  
With days eroded   
    
Like the shores upon   
Which we strolled, listening  
To the crashing waves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Lovely series of haiku.
Gooden Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Beautiful Haikus. I enjoyed reading this.
Cahill Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 3:17 PM
Hi Sherese, Thank you for reading my poem. I read some of yours and was inspired to attempt a dizain of my own. Strangely, when I reread "That Girl", I realized we both referred to the word "yarn". It was such a coincidence! I hope, if you read my dizain, you did not mind. When I read "That Girl" the first time, I only read the first stanza. Again, I hope you do not mind, and thanks for reading my poem. Jennifer Cahill
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