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Untitled No 29

What do I want so badly? god of earth or of war? Why am I falling so madly for a torch when I once had a star? When will my heart find its answer? When will these blind eyes see that my own indecision is cancer, slowly eating the life out of me? What is it I’m so fixed upon now? Why can’t my blue eyes look away? Is there something I’m supposed to do now? I know the two things I should say. There’s only one step left to take, Walk forward, or backward, but still Whichever I do, two hearts break And broken hearts often can kill.

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Date: 9/28/2024 1:40:00 PM
Cool beans Dan. Now let me see #28
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Daniel Bailey
Date: 9/28/2024 2:39:00 PM
It’s right here, silly goose. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/untitled_no_28_1676857

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