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I miss you when we talk I miss the way you walk Even when you sulk.

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Skat A

Date: 6/22/2016 10:31:00 PM

well done Melissa...skat

John Rhinem

Date: 2/20/2009 10:38:00 AM

Smile~"Hello Precious Melissa!"~Welcome to 'The Soup' dear lady! I read all three of Your post here-and I would say, among a few things-just keep writing dear, and Your words shall grow brighter and brighter as you go! Smile, and yes, love sometimes can be a very complicated thing? Yet as they say, "better to love than not to love at all!"~So, "You Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day Melissa, Warmth Always To You, John!":)

Judy Riley

Date: 2/20/2009 10:15:00 AM

This is wonderful, did you realize it can also be a Senyru? 5/7/5 I miss you when we talk. I miss the way you walk, even when you sulk. This is strong the way it is,or the count can be correct for the senryu, but I am not sure of the break in the first sentence, but breaking after" we "put emphasis on" talk "and that I think could work. I am a self tought poet, so I can be wrong on that. I tried Judy Riley