Wm Paul Poet Rhyme

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As the clouds began to tumble,
The wind began to rise,
In the ground was a rumble
Where in some fear lies.

The hills then started to dance,
Forest trees their swayings,
Mountains then started to prance
Some people start their prayings.

Then wake me from this daytime nightmare,
From a shattered Earth,
Day light shows me life is near,
Comes a new re-birth.

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Josie Whitehead May 30, 2012 at 1:40 AM I loved this poem except, I am sorry to say, the last verse, which I think went astray a bit. It started when you added "nightmare" because this extra word upset the balance of the metre. I think this really good poem is worth going over the last verse again. It could be that you could call your poem "Volcano"?? I hope this helps you. Wm Paul June 24, 2012 at 11:15 AM I Think I was thinking Earthquack,