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I was lost tryna find life's key Befuddlement Thinkin' the world needed to love G A Monument My vision was still cloudy, see? Poor Judgement My daddy wasn't proud of me He Wasn't Attention rushed in like a flowing sea Too Abundant Including bloodsuckers like riding fleas Too Indulgent Fell down surrounded by my life's debris Took Adjustment Tryna change and grow... reached out to HE A New Covenant And my Daddy has forgiven me Benevolent
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Palmer Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 3:22 PM
hope you have forgiven daddy too,,loved it
Mister Roboto Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 9:45 AM
FunkY! I digg the outta boundaries style!
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Touching written Gianna, glad your dad forgiven you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 6:35 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life Gianna. Love, Carol
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April 28, 2012 at 4:14 AM
O wow,!!! Nice pen you have there!! Deep and profound..breath taking..love it.
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