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Emotions that are never shown
These underlain feelings of being so alone
Emotions that come and go
That ominous, ominous road

The spark of these feelings
The fuel of this depression
You say that you love me
BUT I KNOW ITS A F...ING LIE

Everyone's eyes are on me
All saying whose that guy
the picture comes into focus
none of them would care if i DIE

I Think back as far as I can remember
Since the beginning you've always been this way
using me to get what you want
convincing me that its my price to pay

My fault to take
My chance that passed
Always setting me up to finish last

You set me aside to tend to another
That is you, My very own f...ing mother
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 28, 2026 at 7:50 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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April 12, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Gaston C, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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August 30, 2015 at 2:56 PM
GASTON, Great piece to read today, Well done ~SKAT~
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