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T'was lost in limbo, your mailbox was full, promise never fulfilled

American sentence - Canadian variant
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 11:25 AM
congrats on your win Dave:-) hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Awe, Thanks for the reply...I'm overwhelmed anytime I see you on one of my contest list, Dave.... hugs...Linda
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Congrats on this win. Your poem was unique!
Raven Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Hi Dave, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. I enjoyed your Monoku Dave....Vlad.
Pennell  Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 5:58 AM
very hitch hikers guide well done congrats
Rodgers Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Stephen, remember your towel
Callus Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 4:52 AM
Your take on this prompt has been very creative, Dave; totally different from other entries. Congratulations on this fine win. ~ Regards // paul
Rodgers Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 7:03 AM
Thanks Paul
Tagore Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Congrats on your win, Dave. Hugs, Bobby
Rodgers Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Thanks Bobby
A   Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 8:36 PM
hello Dave, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA
Rodgers Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thanks Linda, as usual you set up an interesting contest which elicited many and varied responses. I'm glad mine met your approval.
Guzzi Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 7:53 PM
I believe the varient is still based in observation so Dave what you have written would not be either a haiku or an american sentence [no idea what you mean by Canadian variant?] The word 'Twas would not be used for sure its an 18th or early 19th century word for It was - the ' replaces the missing letter & limbo is not an objective reality so it would not be used either.
Guzzi Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 7:56 PM
the full mailbox let fly my letter: my promise unfulflled - would be a bit better BUT a promise is an abstraction too.
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