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T'was lost in limbo, your mailbox was full, promise never fulfilled American sentence - Canadian variant

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2016 11:25:00 AM

congrats on your win Dave:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 5:06:00 PM

Awe, Thanks for the reply...I'm overwhelmed anytime I see you on one of my contest list, Dave.... hugs...Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 12:48:00 PM

Congrats on this win. Your poem was unique!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/13/2016 10:13:00 AM

Hi Dave, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. I enjoyed your Monoku Dave....Vlad.

Stephen Pennell

Date: 3/13/2016 5:58:00 AM

very hitch hikers guide well done congrats

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/15/2016 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Stephen, remember your towel

Paul Callus

Date: 3/13/2016 4:52:00 AM

Your take on this prompt has been very creative, Dave; totally different from other entries. Congratulations on this fine win. ~ Regards // paul

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/14/2016 7:03:00 AM

Thanks Paul

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 3/12/2016 10:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Dave. Hugs, Bobby

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/13/2016 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Bobby

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 8:36:00 PM

hello Dave, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/13/2016 1:15:00 PM

Thanks Linda, as usual you set up an interesting contest which elicited many and varied responses. I'm glad mine met your approval.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/24/2016 7:53:00 PM

I believe the varient is still based in observation so Dave what you have written would not be either a haiku or an american sentence [no idea what you mean by Canadian variant?] The word 'Twas would not be used for sure its an 18th or early 19th century word for It was - the ' replaces the missing letter & limbo is not an objective reality so it would not be used either.

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/24/2016 7:56:00 PM

the full mailbox let fly my letter: my promise unfulflled - would be a bit better BUT a promise is an abstraction too.