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Tell me a story
The groaning of the wood hull 
I can see my shore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 5:08 PM
this one I like even better. seems more haiku-ish for me!!
Martin Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 2:05 PM
Thank you, I need to leave you a comment on your page about this comment.
Chircop Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Interestong post jeremy
Martin Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Thanks!
A   Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 9:14 PM
a good night story sounds perfect about now.. xox~PD
Martin Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 2:04 PM
I know!!! Tell me a story, PDA.
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