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Keep pushing me against my chest where my hearts suppose to lie and make me cry
Draw the very blood that was given to me
Cast shadows over my head while I’m dancing in a whirlwind
Leave me bare and in despair and then maybe I’ll know what lonely is
A promise broken while a lie is blossoming
I’m broken down, weak, take advantage of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Velazquez Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 7:49 PM
This for me sounds like your describing a relationship between someone who is very naive, and a scoundrel. Let me know if this was the point you were trying to make.
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December 7, 2010 at 4:56 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ronda. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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December 6, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight .. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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