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"the future holds a powerful tomorrow
 dont know if i am strong enough to make it
 death has no weakness
 ready to give into the sweet temptation
 a place with no more hurt
 a place where i can no longer feel pain
 where cutting is like morphine
 rushing through your body
 letting you escape your inner pain
 releasing your soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 15, 2010 at 11:50 PM
strong three first lines,enjoyed your write Ian,..P.D.
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November 12, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Hello Ian This is so sad and sensitive.Is it about your feelings,your pain?then writing like this can help to release the hurt that life dishes out which is sometimes almost too hard for us to bear Whatever the situation I like the way you write.You convey strong emotions with which perhaps others can empathise.And through your writing skills touch other's hearts and minds and if need be set their feelings free. Love JUNE(Sylvia)
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